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 Aug 17 2004, 07:14 PM
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read this poem that i wrote and tell me if it is good or even if it makes sense
 my heart is missing so much, some of which i cannot find, but seeing what is lost, turns my heart blind.. what goes from a glance in the mirror, turns into a stare, looking deep inside this pain, wondering if its caution or despair.. questioning my feelings in relationships, why they quickly end, was my heart ever broken? or is it taking a lifetime to mend?.. thanks! |
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Aug 17 2004, 07:21 PM
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 eww boys have Co0tiES :P Group: Member Posts: 48 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 37,575 |
mm gewd poem props lol
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chellibabe124 my poem Aug 17 2004, 07:14 PM
IIO__oII someone move it to writing..
and its good. :] Aug 17 2004, 07:15 PM xjjajeengx its good. moved. Aug 17 2004, 07:16 PM MyVermilionPlague Nice poem. =-] Aug 17 2004, 07:17 PM Devastation this poem deserves to be published. Aug 17 2004, 07:46 PM chellibabe124 aww you guys make me feel speshul Aug 17 2004, 07:56 PM F1R3B4T i agree this poem is realli gud i like it
u shud e... Aug 18 2004, 02:53 AM
me_myself_andi2003 love ur poem... did u just break up? the poem is l... Aug 21 2004, 02:11 AM |
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