For what it's worth |
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 Aug 14 2004, 04:33 PM
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For what it's worth, I think you're pretty,
For what it's worth, I think you're smart. For what it's worth, I think you're witty, And for what it's worth, please take my heart. For what it's worth, I want your love, For what it's worth, will you be mine? For what it's worth, you're what I dream of, And for what it's worth, for you I pine. For what it's worth, please take my hand, For what it's worth, I know it's rough. For what it's worth, with you I'll stand, For what it's worth is not enough. |
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Aug 16 2004, 05:41 AM
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 and they say imitation is flattering  Group: Member Posts: 1,337 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,269 |
QUOTE(CrackedRearView @ Aug 15 2004, 12:31 AM) I feel there can be negatives... Or at least repairs...if you fixed a verse and made it sound better to my liking, I would change it for good and give you some credit...I always like negative/corrective feedback. I don't see any real problems with it. Maybe the "for you I pine" line, but you really don't have any choices with that one. |
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CrackedRearView For what it's worth Aug 14 2004, 04:33 PM
Jordan Inc. *claps*
awesome Aug 14 2004, 07:14 PM CrackedRearView It's a fraction of the length I wanted it to b... Aug 14 2004, 11:17 PM F1R3B4T wen it comes to writing n stuff, there is no negat... Aug 14 2004, 11:56 PM eboarder2020 Props.... Great job Aug 15 2004, 12:11 AM CrackedRearView QUOTE(F1R3B4T @ Aug 14 2004, 10:56 PM)wen it ... Aug 15 2004, 12:31 AM Sa-Chan QUOTEFor what it's worth, will you be mine.
... Aug 15 2004, 09:20 AM tootsie_kiddo i lyk it itz cute! Aug 15 2004, 12:13 PM
Azarel Wow, I could've sworn that I commented on this... Jan 18 2006, 01:40 AM |
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