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 Aug 14 2004, 01:24 PM
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She hides her scars, hides her wounds..
it shall be always her eyes that tell the deepest truths.. Her wounds she never shows.. all the sorrows that inside she holds.. Her pretty exterior will never show... No one would ever guess All the things she has to confess.. All the things she's gone through, will never be told, for it's her eyes that tell the deepest truths.. [[I know I don't rhyme much... but it's not bout rhyming really.. I just had to write it out.. hope u enjoy. To0dles.]] - The Lee |
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Aug 16 2004, 05:36 AM
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 and they say imitation is flattering Group: Member Posts: 1,337 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,269 |
Very deep.
Screw rhyming. There are people I know who write poems that have 24 lines of non-rhyming [poem]with random rhyming words tossed in there. Don't stain my forte with your botched and unimpressive writing. *cough* But your poem was very good. |
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marfmallow Her.. Aug 14 2004, 01:24 PM
inquisitive_ Wow! That is so nice! Great job! Aug 14 2004, 01:27 PM marfmallow Lol thanks.. I LOVE STEWIE GRIFFIN MANN! lol. ... Aug 14 2004, 01:28 PM tootsie_kiddo *claps*
i lyk it! itz MY type of poem Aug 15 2004, 12:18 PM sheepy its really deeep Aug 15 2004, 03:39 PM
annabel_x QUOTE(sheepy @ Aug 15 2004, 4:39 PM) it... Dec 29 2005, 03:15 PM F1R3B4T duzn't matter if it duzn't rhyme, im not a... Aug 16 2004, 04:24 AM sweetdreamsx3 Yeah, the poem you've written is very deep.. Aug 23 2004, 10:31 PM curi0usbr0wneyes i love this poem! it says a lot of things that... Aug 27 2004, 10:21 PM Stately Lover Good job. I like it a lot. Aug 28 2004, 10:36 AM davexd really nice Dec 27 2005, 01:40 AM Babi3xFoOlish tats deep. Dec 27 2005, 03:27 AM instantmusic give it up for the deep man, alright. =] Dec 27 2005, 03:37 AM skp86 Wow. That's deep. *appluase* Dec 27 2005, 09:39 AM lavadrugs You don't need to rhy to make great potery Dec 27 2005, 01:23 PM ComradeRed What the hell, it doesn't even rhyme! Dec 27 2005, 02:09 PM Bobblehead425 ^^^ "free writing" my friend.
I love it... Dec 28 2005, 09:57 AM anime_gurl_123 Absolute art. Wonderfully written Dec 29 2005, 03:16 PM |
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