She, A short story I just wrote Options

[sporadic]

Okay, I think it's really cheesy and melodramatic, but oh well.. Tell me what you think:

...It's interesting. I just met you, and I know that we have a future. I pride myself on being observant, and when I look into your eyes.... When you look back at me, it's like you're seeing past me. Like you can't handle looking at me, and prefer to look straight through. When I'm around you, I feel bare. I can tell she feels it, too. She thinks that you are meant for her. I guess I can see where she'd get that. But I know we're meant to be.

...I know you're angry. We've been together for a year, and it's just getting better every day. I'm sorry I screwed up. I didn't mean to hurt myself, I didn't mean to hurt you. I'm sorry if I did. But even so, you'll nurse me back to health, won't you? I believe in you and I trust your love. Even if you don't trust me. She's still watching us, I can see her in the corner of my eye. I know what she's doing. She's waiting for an opening. A way to break into Us. A way to tear Us apart. She's been watching since we met.

...But I love you. You're not weak, I know that. We've been together for 2 years. And I want to be with you. Only you. I thought you felt the same. No. Spare me your excuses, you've already done it. You can't take it back. I'm sorry. I never thought she could do it. I underestimated that slimy weasel. I held you tightly and smiled at her over your shoulder. What have I done to you?

...So now you're with her. I don't want to be the jealous ex, but I can't stand when you hold her. I can't stand to see you together. You look at me with pity in your eyes, and my heart turns cold. I've become a shell. I truly thought that you were the one. I believed we'd spend our lives together. I thought she'd move on and leave us. My friends tell me that I'll live. That I can go on with my life, but I'm seeing them less and less lately. I've become pale and my hair is a mess. I look like ****, but I still love you. I can't exist any more. You destroyed me.

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nice... so much emotion!
beautiful story u were born to be a natural writer