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 Aug 11 2004, 11:04 PM
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 who again?  Group: Member Posts: 555 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 31,458  |
ok everyone, if you have poetry, any poetry submit it please. i love to read it as well as write it. dont be afraid, any piece of poetry is a work of art. I could learn a few pointers as well as give a few pointers, if you have any opinions about poems give them out, help the poet out if he has a few mistakes you think he made. and please, all of the poems here are copywrited by the people who write them, it really pisses me off to see someone copy and paste a poem from another website. thanx.
<3 andrew. |
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Aug 12 2004, 10:27 AM
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 BiGdRaGoN31 Group: Member Posts: 463 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 2,585 |
herre u go,i wrote this bout a gurl that use to like me but doesnt anymore,n i still like her,
When you run away I follow When you feel sad I feel your sorrow I hope there will be better days for you Maybe tomorrow Through all the sadness and madness There is still some gladness You make me happy You make me sad You make me jealous You make me mad You don’t like me But I still like you What should I do? Should I act a fool? The only thing I want to hear you say is I like you too But to bad I wasted my time Lost my chance It might be a little too late for some romance The time has come The time has past I still think bout you all the time Can’t get you off my mind I care about you Don’t you see? More than you care about me Even though You cause me pain You cause me stress You cause me anger God you give me every feeling in the world! But I still can’t let you go I just want you by my side I want you with me all the time I want to protect you I want to be there for you I.....I love you |
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Devastation Poetry. Aug 11 2004, 11:04 PM
Devastation im shortening my poetry submittings. i find them t... Aug 11 2004, 11:33 PM Devastation great flow, i love this type of poem. great word c... Aug 12 2004, 10:34 AM BiGdRaGoN31 thx, u think it would be better if it was like:
I... Aug 12 2004, 02:39 PM F1R3B4T whoa kick ass poem Aug 12 2004, 02:55 PM BiGdRaGoN31 thank u Aug 12 2004, 04:34 PM Devastation QUOTE(BiGdRaGoN31 @ Aug 12 2004, 4:34 PM)than... Aug 12 2004, 10:27 PM ceng Laughter is the best medicine
Laughter is the bes... Aug 13 2004, 11:00 AM black_cloud10 heh awesome idea andrew ^_^
uhm this one is curre... Aug 13 2004, 11:55 AM
MyVermilionPlague Ooh. Great poems, everyone!! =-]
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