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 Aug 10 2004, 12:01 PM
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the tears, the emptiness, the sorrow
surfacing near and above my heart the confusion, the trauma, the ignorance is already coming out, where do i start does it matter anymore, can anyone hear all my screams, all the pain and content what do i do when everything falls when its my whole that i have spent Dont want to be wrong, your leaving me always alone in my world, my hole dont do it to me, im going crazy poured my love into a frame, as well as my soul As we depart, im going away nearing the cold, nearing the dark as you leave me inside the gates death is what you have sparked cant go back now, nowhere to run nowhere to hide, no where to seek because its too late now the depression has reached its peak. i love that poem, as i was writing it, i could feel my emotions taking place in my heart. anyways, hope you enjoy. |
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Aug 11 2004, 02:22 AM
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wow ALL ur writing is sooo good. *envious*
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Devastation Surfacing. Aug 10 2004, 12:01 PM
BlondE x Babii good poem andrew Aug 10 2004, 12:03 PM marfmallow I do enjoy. You're a natural cookie kiddo. Lol... Aug 10 2004, 12:04 PM Devastation QUOTE(BlondE x Babii @ Aug 10 2004, 12:03 PM)... Aug 10 2004, 01:32 PM marfmallow Symbolism is fun. Makes you think. By the way... L... Aug 10 2004, 04:28 PM
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