I Love You, Emotion + Skill Included.. |
 Aug 10 2004, 02:39 AM
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 Hip-Hop's Thai Boxer..  Group: Member Posts: 43 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,679  |
verse I wrote to this girl a while back..
I can't explain all of my actions, the yelling and the rudeness - The truth is, I think the pain from Cupid's arrow made me do this - When I was hurt, I swore your words' uses was endless - You were my doctor, minus the suit n syringes - I can't let go, and I know that the pain is worth you - Hate when I don't have you, and despise this patience virtue - When my words hurt you, girl, the pain inside's shifty - I step out in the rain, and let the angels cry with me - You're all I need, so your departure would bring death to me - You're ecstasy, I'd choose you over a breath to breathe - So step with me, take my hand, my words aren't untrue - You give me life like the sun do, you're the one, boo, I LOVE YOU - |
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Aug 11 2004, 12:11 AM
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Hip-Hop's Thai Boxer.. Group: Member Posts: 43 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,679 |
thanks for the replies.. and ^^ yeah.. it IS a rap.. but rap verses are poetry also.. or at least can be
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Smoke360 I Love You Aug 10 2004, 02:39 AM
tootsie_kiddo omg... ur such a sweet guy Aug 10 2004, 04:45 AM Smoke360 Haha.. Thank you =) Aug 10 2004, 05:12 AM tainted_angel You're very talented and sweet. Very refreshin... Aug 10 2004, 06:24 AM grapplefan *acts like a groupie*
awww jake, u so freakin swe... Aug 10 2004, 04:48 PM Smoke360 gimme gimme gimme that groupie love..
haha, naw..... Aug 10 2004, 06:41 PM xquizit very nice. lucky girl. Aug 10 2004, 07:04 PM Fashionista225 ha, could be a rap...that would be tight lol. BUt ... Aug 10 2004, 11:38 PM F1R3B4T wow that is serious skill
i am big fan of rapping
... Aug 11 2004, 02:17 AM vietspirit in one of my posts, u said to hit da song for u..w... Aug 12 2004, 05:19 PM
xmissrachiex i didnt even realize it was a rap, but you're ... Aug 12 2004, 05:37 PM |
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