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Teenage Blues, A Song
Sa-Chan
post Aug 8 2004, 02:45 PM
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Bah...I'm not a song writer..

Teenage Blues
By: Savannah Harrison


Crimson nights, <nights>
Echoes of red regret. <regret>
Tear my heart into bloody shreds, <shreds>
Just so long as I die being solely yours. <yours>

<Chorus>

I'm falling again,
Please stay to catch me.
I can't remember yet how to begin,
To be the person I was before.

I'm waiting,
The bus has yet to come.
And I'm taking,
The long route home.

<End Chorus>

When did things become like this?
I'm sick of living in a world like this.
Leave me be; I'm content to cry.
I don't want to live just to die.

My parents are hounding me,
My relationship blows.
I'm longing to sleep,
And I'm tired of stepping over everyone's toes.

<Chorus>

Take me away.
I wanna know what's truly mine.
These days it seems.
Being a teenager is punishable like crime.

These are my teenage blues,
I've counted them all out on fingers and toes.
Can't you see, I'm sick of hating you?
But you don't care, and you're not through.

<Chorus>

This world sucks,
And I've messed up in every way.
I don't know what to do,
And I can't beg childhood to stay.

Cuz I'm inbetween childhood and pain,
And I don't know what to say.
So I'll just pass it by,
As nothing more than teenage days. <Days>
 
 
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ryfitaDF
post Aug 10 2004, 05:13 PM
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aaaaawesome. it like it allright. i'd change the name, though. it makes it seem like some kinda song blues song that's gunna hve the line "i got them acne, squeaky vioce, boob growing, pubic hair teenage blues" like cody from step by step does. just a thought happy.gif keep up the good work.
 

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