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Devastation
post Aug 10 2004, 12:01 PM
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the tears, the emptiness, the sorrow
surfacing near and above my heart
the confusion, the trauma, the ignorance
is already coming out, where do i start

does it matter anymore, can anyone hear
all my screams, all the pain and content
what do i do when everything falls
when its my whole that i have spent

Dont want to be wrong, your leaving me
always alone in my world, my hole
dont do it to me, im going crazy
poured my love into a frame, as well as my soul

As we depart, im going away
nearing the cold, nearing the dark
as you leave me inside the gates
death is what you have sparked

cant go back now, nowhere to run
nowhere to hide, no where to seek
because its too late now
the depression has reached its peak.

i love that poem, as i was writing it, i could feel my emotions taking place in my heart. anyways, hope you enjoy.
 
 
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Devastation
post Aug 10 2004, 01:32 PM
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QUOTE(BlondE x Babii @ Aug 10 2004, 12:03 PM)
good poem andrew happy.gif

well, my poetry is all symbolic at a poem.
 

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