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[BeautifulSoul]

The slap across her face,
Was enough to cry about.
As she gets pushed to the floor,
Her arms and legs throb with pain.
She tries to block the hands coming at her,
But the murderer is too quick and strong.
He tries to punch her and pummel her in the stomach,
He managed to do so without difficulty.
She tries to get up and intends to kick him,
But her legs were too much in pain,
Ready to fall off her body.
Then the murderer chokes her to death,
Right before the cops shoot him.

Please tell me what you think. Thanks.

[tootsie_kiddo]

woah.. datz scary but really gud!