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 Aug 9 2004, 01:10 PM
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 I heart Se7en  Group: Member Posts: 82 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 37,405  |
The slap across her face,
Was enough to cry about. As she gets pushed to the floor, Her arms and legs throb with pain. She tries to block the hands coming at her, But the murderer is too quick and strong. He tries to punch her and pummel her in the stomach, He managed to do so without difficulty. She tries to get up and intends to kick him, But her legs were too much in pain, Ready to fall off her body. Then the murderer chokes her to death, Right before the cops shoot him. Please tell me what you think. Thanks. |
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Aug 9 2004, 09:57 PM
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 *aSh* =] Group: Member Posts: 2,075 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,101 |
ahh, scary.. but it was good.. kinda seemed real when ur reading it lol
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BeautifulSoul What You Get Aug 9 2004, 01:10 PM
tootsie_kiddo woah.. datz scary but really gud! Aug 10 2004, 04:49 AM tainted_angel Scary stuffage there. But overall good as well. Aug 10 2004, 06:26 AM F1R3B4T wow freaky... Aug 11 2004, 12:19 PM
BeautifulSoul Ha...thanks for the comments people. Yeah I know i... Aug 13 2004, 10:26 AM |
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