take me away, *my poem for you* |
take me away, *my poem for you* |
Aug 7 2004, 02:23 PM
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Got Me? ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 34 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 26,430 |
this is my life, there is no getting through
all of my thoughts, revolve around you I cant seem to stray, from the feelings around You helped me stand up, then pushed me back down I feel so alone, so lost without you I cant see strait, or know what to do I miss you so much, it hurts just to breathe this feeling is so strong, I just want to leave As I kneel to the floor, and begin to pray I start to cry, and scream take me away This is too hard for me, the pain is too much I cant stand to stand here, without your touch So without even noticing, I drift off to sleep to never never land, and off so so deep There you will see me, and we meet again the love of my life, will then grab my hand. |
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Aug 7 2004, 07:56 PM
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![]() dizzy me up. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 3,191 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,139 |
wow i really like it.
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*MiSSTHaNG* take me away Aug 7 2004, 02:23 PM
strwbrrykiwi23 ... deep ... Aug 7 2004, 02:27 PM
F1R3B4T wow so forlorn... so deep... Aug 7 2004, 08:24 PM
bobbster Aww... I like it. =) Aug 8 2004, 05:45 PM
pnai4eva I liked it...it wuz so deep... Aug 8 2004, 06:30 PM![]() ![]() |