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take me away, *my poem for you*
*MiSSTHaNG*
post Aug 7 2004, 02:23 PM
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this is my life, there is no getting through
all of my thoughts, revolve around you
I cant seem to stray, from the feelings around
You helped me stand up, then pushed me back down

I feel so alone, so lost without you
I cant see strait, or know what to do
I miss you so much, it hurts just to breathe
this feeling is so strong, I just want to leave

As I kneel to the floor, and begin to pray
I start to cry, and scream take me away
This is too hard for me, the pain is too much
I cant stand to stand here, without your touch

So without even noticing, I drift off to sleep
to never never land, and off so so deep
There you will see me, and we meet again
the love of my life, will then grab my hand.
 

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*MiSSTHaNG*   take me away   Aug 7 2004, 02:23 PM
strwbrrykiwi23   ... deep ...   Aug 7 2004, 02:27 PM
sheepy   wow i really like it.   Aug 7 2004, 07:56 PM
F1R3B4T   wow so forlorn... so deep...   Aug 7 2004, 08:24 PM
bobbster   Aww... I like it. =)   Aug 8 2004, 05:45 PM
pnai4eva   I liked it...it wuz so deep...   Aug 8 2004, 06:30 PM


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