You, poem i deticate 2 someone in my life |
You, poem i deticate 2 someone in my life |
Aug 4 2004, 02:33 AM
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a poem i wrote 4 someone, wat do u think? be as honest as u want, i dont really care
You by kantoaznboi Your voice, I crave to hear it One more time, My heart, Yearns for you In my arms, My Soul Rejoices each time When we talk, You have become My ecstasy, High on the joy You give me Each and everyday, And my life Didn’t seem so Dark and desolate, With you Brightening my world, Each day Immersed with happiness, But my heart shattered, Like a piece of glass Dropping to the ground, When u told me You didn’t feel the same. I lost all hope That we would ever be, Wishing, Hoping, Longing, For just one moment With you in my arms, Making you feel safe, And protected From the harsh world. I would wait for eternity Cause you are worth Each minute, Hour, Day, Year, Till I can Call you my boo, But my fear Consumes me, Preventing me from waiting, I think I’ll lose you And be heartbroken Once again, Taking me back To my own Abyss of sorrow You will always Be in my heart, You inspired me, And you lifted my world, I only hope I had that effect, On you. |
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Aug 5 2004, 08:43 PM
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![]() He ate it, I swear! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 659 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,075 |
Awww... That's good, Brandon. There's one part that made me laugh. "Call you my boo" Lol. Lo siento. I don't mean to make fun of it or anything but I just laugh when people call each other "boo." Anyway, g'job Brandon! =DD
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kantoaznboi You Aug 4 2004, 02:33 AM
x_angawhomps *snaps fingers*
Nice, I think it'd make that ... Aug 4 2004, 05:10 AM
Fashionista225 Wow, I love it! Sounds like the story of my l... Aug 4 2004, 09:41 AM
seriouslynikki i love this poem. its like how my life is and how ... Aug 4 2004, 01:43 PM
LatinaLady aww. thats sweet brandon. i like it. it has a flow... Aug 4 2004, 03:18 PM
sheepy ^ yeah me too. my small range of vocab is poopie. ... Aug 4 2004, 05:59 PM
mystical Good stuff brandon....uhm seems like somthing i wo... Aug 5 2004, 08:33 PM
black_cloud10 very very cool brandon =D Aug 5 2004, 08:34 PM
ichiban Awesome ... very deep `nd if some guy wrote th... Aug 6 2004, 12:04 AM![]() ![]() |