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Your all I want, small poem
*MiSSTHaNG*
post Aug 4 2004, 11:44 AM
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I woke up one night, and thought about you
The sound of your voice, the things that you do
I thought about us, and what I had lost
I kept you in mind, and counted the cost

You were always there, there for me
When no one else could, you could always see
the pain that was heald, and the fears that I knew
You took it away, and put it on you

As I started to cry, thinking of what I let go
My telephone rang, a number I did not know
On the other line, as clear as the night
You quietly asked me, are you alright
 
 
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pbear
post Aug 4 2004, 11:54 AM
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That's really good; nice rhyming.
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*MiSSTHaNG*   Your all I want   Aug 4 2004, 11:44 AM
kaleidoscoped   That's really good; nice rhyming.   Aug 4 2004, 11:54 AM
CEP   You know..eventhough I thought the poem was nice, ...   Aug 4 2004, 12:08 PM
xtiffysweetzx   awww   Aug 4 2004, 12:11 PM
seriouslynikki   awww....thats soooooooo niiiice!!!...   Aug 4 2004, 01:28 PM
XaZnX07   thats a good poem good job   Aug 4 2004, 01:52 PM
LatinaLady   i like this poem cuz i dont like it when it dont e...   Aug 4 2004, 03:20 PM
sheepy   wow. i love it !!!!! seriously...   Aug 4 2004, 05:58 PM


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