In Love With You, Poem I wrote |
In Love With You, Poem I wrote |
Aug 2 2004, 05:48 PM
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i like ur duckies ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 42 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,887 |
I wrote this just the other day, when I realized I really do love my boyfriend. This is my first happy poem. Tell me what you think!
In Love With You This time it's different; This time it's for real. It's not a silly crush; It's more than that, I feel. At first I didn't know; It all happened kinda fast. One minute I'm meeting you, The next, the question's asked. But since then, we have talked, And I know you so much better. You're exactly what I want; I'm glad we got together. I sit and wonder what will happen In a year or maybe two. 'Cause my life has totally changed Since I fell in love with you. |
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Aug 3 2004, 02:22 PM
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![]() hi. call me linda. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 8,187 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,475 |
that's really good- nice job on the rhyming.
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Invisablepopcorn In Love With You Aug 2 2004, 05:48 PM
Jordan Inc. great work! [= Aug 2 2004, 07:05 PM
eboarder2020 I like... Very very good Aug 2 2004, 09:00 PM
sheepy awww.. i really love it ! the rhymes nd the li... Aug 3 2004, 02:14 PM
kaleidoscoped It's really cute.
Good job!
Nice rhymes. Aug 4 2004, 11:30 AM
LatinaLady thats love =)
show it to him, its real nice. Aug 4 2004, 03:22 PM
Invisablepopcorn Thanks for all of your great replies! Oh, and... Aug 4 2004, 03:40 PM
preciousheart wow...very nice! great job! Aug 4 2004, 03:52 PM![]() ![]() |