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Roses, my fav subject..
PoorSoulOfaPoet
post Jul 30 2004, 11:42 AM
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Rose

when a rose
comes into this earth
its fresh and new
as it start a life
the bright florescent colors of the petals
the soothing smell of the nectar
the embracing feeling when u see them
its a new beginning of life

passing through the smell, the colors, the feeling
lies something living
trying to survive
not understand its meaning of life
feeling as if its wanted
but not needed...
its there but not noticable
drifting through the winds
feeling as if it could fly away

after a while...
it became wilted
dying...
the petals become black
it rots
nobody there to fight it

one after another
petals fall to the ground
letting every memory pass
every moment of truth
as if its living
was not a change in somethings life...
the cold breeze chills
while the black rose droops..
unnoticable..
letting go of its life to nothing...
falling and falling
hitting against the earth
so quickly, so shortly..

life ends in an instant
it began
now it ended
it was once there
now its not..

no emotions
no mistorfune
nothing to have cried about
the rose lived a life...
now its over...
 

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PoorSoulOfaPoet   Roses   Jul 30 2004, 11:42 AM


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