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 Jul 18 2004, 04:09 PM
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 i've never wanted anything rationale.  Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 8,449 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 19,045  |
keep in mind it was a. 1:30AM and b. i havent written in a lonnnng time
Untitled 7/17/04 Don't you see what your doing to me Can't you sense how much I care? I feel that sometimes you don't know me How the hell is this fair? Why did I allow myself To let you affect me the way you do? I told myself not care this much But instead I fell in love with you. Theres just something about you, It could be how you look at me. Or maybe how we can talk for hours How you make me feel free. I can't believe I'm saying this, For the first time I think it's true. I just need to say it, That I'm in love with you. |
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Jul 24 2004, 02:27 AM
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 LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
aaw man. that sucks. that you're saying "i love you" even though he's a jerk.
it's a good poem, though. it's very nice. |
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