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Its Crazy How A Girl Can Affect A Guy.
grapplefan
post Jul 23 2004, 06:02 PM
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Ok well I have no Idea what to call this. Maybe Its A Long non rhyming Poem, Maybe Its A Story, Maybe Its Just life..... I Dont Know, But I wrote this just now, it was all from the top of my head no brainstorming or nothing It just naturally came out, so sorry if the punctuation, and spelling and grammar are not perfect, but I wrote this just in case someone is bored and wants something to read. at the same time its so you girls can see just how much a you can affect a guy lol. By the way sorry its not the most perfect story and I left alto of details out, but I was trying to rush it lol. if you dont like the story then oh well im sorry to have wasted your time :(.








Nothing Without Her... By Emmanuel Morales (ME) lol.


Its crazy, he just lays on his bed with his hands on his head looking up at his ceiling wondering, thinking, guessing, how is she doing, what can she be doing, does she even know that while she’s with the other guy Chris is just depressed in his room thinking about her? Chances are she doesn’t know, why? Because she is too busy in the other guys arms.

He goes crazy at the fact that right now she can be doing something sexual with a guy who probably doesn’t care 1/1000000 th of what HE cares for her, the more he thinks about it, the more he cries, the more he cries the crazier he goes, the crazier he goes just leads him to see that maybe love is bullcrap , and that maybe no matter how great of a person you are, your other half can leave you at any given moment for no reason. He gets scared at the thought that no matter how great you treat a girl she can just walk out on you.

He gets out his bed in tears and stretches for another day, knowing that it’s another day that he doesn’t get to see her smile any more, another day that his fingers can not feel her hair, and he cries harder and it hurts him, so now he’s breathing harder , he knows that right now all those pet names she used to call him, are not his any more, that now she’s using them on him , his legs feel weak so he goes up against the wall just clueless, as to how the hell can a girl be so important that now his whole life is messed up.

He is shocked to see he can’t breathe without her, his hands tremble, his family at home knows something is wrong, but he has too much pride to admit to tell them, so lots of thoughts run through his head right now…

He thinks about every stuffed animal he bought her, he thought about all the money he spent on getting her gifts just because he thought her smile was worth it, he remembers all the nights he would cuddle with her too watch a movie, all the times he made her smile by saying something funny, the times he would console her when she felt ugly. He remembers watching her favorite tv shows when shes gone just so he can feel closer to her. His friends would try to introduce him to other girls but he didn’t care much for it, he already knew he found his princess, his queen.

He takes a deep breath and wipes his tears.. …..

But they come back down when he remembers all the talks of FUTURE KIDS, and all the talks of how their future home would be, and all the great vacations they would take together in the future. He remembers how at one time he felt so sure she was the one, that’s it his life was complete she was his other half…..

Cries harder.

She has his dream come true, and it hurts him to know that another guy took his dream, another guy is using his his soulmate. He knows that the other guy has like 3 more gf’s and he’s told her that. But hell, she just wont believe him and thinks hes just jealous, so it hurts him even more knowing that he loves her soo much and that another guy is just using her.

It hurts him to know that the girl he treated like a queen, is not being treated like a slut.

*cries in a angry way*

He decides to sit down on the floor and write her a letter, his tear drops are falling on that letter, but he decides to keep on, he tells her how he feels and how he misses her, he closes the envelope… he walks towards her block and pays a little kid to go take her the envelope, the kid takes the envelope, while the guy is still crying , the kid leaves….

He stays in the corner of the block but the girl doesn’t see him, she just looks at the kid who gave her the letter, and the kid runs away,
She looks at the letter and throws it on the floor, the guy sees this, but she doesn’t know hes looking , he gets hearbroken and he knows he will not get her back, he starts getting a lot of toughts.

…………….

She hears a big car crash and runs to the corner of her block to see what happened. When she looks she sees its him under the wheel of a car, theres people all over looking at the scene, she stays speechless, she can not believe her eyes……

she runs back to her block and picks up the letter she threw away in the floor, she decides to read it, at the end of the letter it says “if anyone had to hurt me im glad it was you”

She starts crying, she starts thinking about all the times she did him wrong, she tries to run back to the scene in hopes of him somehow still being alive even thought she knows he’s dead, but she atleast wants to make sure he can hear her out, now she wants to apologize , she keeps running towards the scene, and she gets 2 big surprises, one she sees the paramedics putting him in a body bag, and surprise number to when she looks to her left she sees her new boyfriend cuddling with another girl……
 
 
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LiNHy POO
post Jul 23 2004, 09:07 PM
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wow how sad!! but its a great story!!!! happy.gif
 

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grapplefan   Its Crazy How A Girl Can Affect A Guy.   Jul 23 2004, 06:02 PM
grapplefan   by the way im new to CB, so if this story is simil...   Jul 23 2004, 06:06 PM
xlilchinezeboix   got bored so i read it...one word...woooooooo........   Jul 23 2004, 06:06 PM
grapplefan   lol thanks lol   Jul 23 2004, 06:07 PM
grapplefan   hey if any of u took time to read this please leav...   Jul 23 2004, 06:12 PM
tainted_angel   Wow that was deep. Love is beautiful when it la...   Jul 23 2004, 06:13 PM
grapplefan   thanks lol, but hey if any of you think the story ...   Jul 23 2004, 06:18 PM
f00LisH_h3aRt63   whoa that is such an awesome story!!!...   Jul 23 2004, 07:06 PM
grapplefan   haha thanks lol   Jul 23 2004, 07:07 PM
x_angawhomps   WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. -speechless- *claps...   Jul 23 2004, 07:09 PM
grapplefan   thanks im appreciating the feedback :), honestly a...   Jul 23 2004, 07:12 PM
black_cloud10   that was awesome. i think my jaw hit the desk lol...   Jul 23 2004, 09:01 PM
LiNHy POO   wow how sad!! but its a great story!...   Jul 23 2004, 09:07 PM
grapplefan   hey pplz thanks for taking time to read it, more f...   Jul 23 2004, 09:09 PM
StarryEyedSurprize   wow thats really good!!!! i love i...   Jul 23 2004, 09:46 PM
grapplefan   thanks :)   Jul 23 2004, 09:55 PM
eboarder2020   Man bro.... Im feelin ya on that one... but like t...   Jul 23 2004, 09:58 PM
grapplefan   im with u bro, thats my whole point, they have tha...   Jul 23 2004, 10:12 PM
black_cloud10   hey i sent the story to my boyfriend. his respons...   Jul 23 2004, 11:36 PM
grapplefan   tell your boyfriend I said thanks :)   Jul 23 2004, 11:39 PM
POonSKi   woah! its long...but good..lolz   Jul 23 2004, 11:52 PM
grapplefan   lol thanks   Jul 24 2004, 12:29 AM
tyedyefroggy   .......................................whoa..........   Jul 24 2004, 01:04 AM
grapplefan   thanks so much :), and for taking the time to read...   Jul 24 2004, 01:19 AM
chaotic_kitt   Its ReAllY sweet.. i almost cried when i read it. ...   Jul 24 2004, 01:28 AM
grapplefan   thanks :)   Jul 24 2004, 10:17 AM
ThePrincessofTKD   woah...that would really suck if that really happe...   Jul 24 2004, 11:23 AM
grapplefan   lol thanks =)   Jul 24 2004, 08:33 PM
grapplefan   oh by the way someone here on cb told me that PEOP...   Jul 24 2004, 09:17 PM
Ze world is a Mask   QUOTE(x_angawhomps @ Jul 23 2004, 7:09 PM)WOW...   Jul 25 2004, 06:25 PM
grapplefan   thanks for the love :)   Jul 25 2004, 11:14 PM
Just_Dream   Aww that's so sweet =D *sigh* If only girls di...   Jul 27 2004, 11:54 PM
grapplefan   *nods his head* lol   Jul 28 2004, 12:12 AM
pikimoo   Dang.. I hope my brother doesn't end up like t...   Jul 28 2004, 12:42 AM
grapplefan   hmmmmm   Jul 28 2004, 12:57 AM
makulit   "He gets scared at the thought that no matter...   Jul 28 2004, 12:59 AM
grapplefan   yeah that was my personal favorite line, cuz thats...   Jul 28 2004, 01:05 AM
grapplefan   oh crap, somone pointed something out, and i gotta...   Jul 28 2004, 01:07 AM
xtremeliquid   Nice story.   Jul 28 2004, 01:29 AM
grapplefan   thanks   Jul 28 2004, 09:34 AM
chica777708   OMG dude great job, I didnt know that guys get emo...   Jul 28 2004, 10:09 PM
Foolish Heart   That was sad, see these stories always make me cry...   Jul 28 2004, 11:58 PM
grapplefan   QUOTE(chica777708 @ Jul 28 2004, 10:09 PM)OMG...   Jul 29 2004, 12:50 AM
RiC3xBoy   wow, what a great story, i like to hear another on...   Aug 1 2004, 08:05 AM
highly_evolved   aw...   Aug 1 2004, 08:27 AM
grapplefan   QUOTE(RiC3xBoy @ Aug 1 2004, 8:05 AM)wow, wha...   Aug 1 2004, 05:22 PM
NatiMarie   That's so sad! That's such a great sto...   Aug 2 2004, 08:18 PM
grapplefan   thanks :)   Aug 3 2004, 12:11 PM
Afghandragon45   dayum mayn.. thats deep like shit.. sounds almost ...   Aug 5 2004, 12:18 AM
xjjajeengx   WOW nice story this would be the perfect topic if...   Aug 5 2004, 12:41 AM
grapplefan   i know yeah, im so slow i didnt see the edit butto...   Aug 5 2004, 02:12 AM
kaleidoscoped   Whoa... That's really sad, but really good.   Aug 5 2004, 12:13 PM
Fashionista225   Aww! I really like it. If you have personal e...   Aug 5 2004, 09:58 PM
grapplefan   well thanks for reading it :)   Aug 7 2004, 01:31 PM
Smoke360   Yeah, I read this when you first posted it.. This...   Aug 9 2004, 10:06 PM
diezelbabygrl_xoxo   one word...deep...touching...okay that was two wor...   Aug 10 2004, 02:10 AM
Angel_Cece   Wow thats reeely good   Aug 10 2004, 09:14 PM
lazy po0h   whoa you are a good writer. that was such a touchi...   Aug 10 2004, 11:15 PM
F1R3B4T   sux? no way! it was hella good! touchin...   Aug 11 2004, 02:59 AM
grapplefan   thanks :)   Aug 11 2004, 08:07 PM
babixlilac   wat evbwun sai its a good story..it is realliee   Aug 11 2004, 08:52 PM
mellyshelly   Wow, I love it!! This is just like my lif...   Aug 12 2004, 07:58 PM
sweetdreamsx3   It gaves me the chills. :D   Aug 12 2004, 09:44 PM
sweetxsimplicity   Interesting, I love it! *claps*   Aug 13 2004, 12:30 AM
xquizit   very well written. truly captured the feeling of h...   Aug 13 2004, 01:45 AM
inevitableblisz   wow, that's realLy deep . . made tears come to...   Aug 26 2004, 05:23 PM
inevitableblisz   i hope you don't mind, but i put a link on my ...   Aug 26 2004, 06:36 PM
mizzinno   i loved it!! great job.. almost made me...   Aug 27 2004, 07:41 PM
ComradeRed   Don't cry because it's over, stare blankly...   Aug 27 2004, 09:28 PM
grapplefan   thanks for all the great comments   Aug 28 2004, 02:29 PM


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