Just another sad poem... read!!! |
 Jul 12 2004, 11:19 PM
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 Wendy Clear  Group: Member Posts: 51 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,961  |
I'm so alone there's no one here
I clos emy eyes and disappear My world goes quiet and fades to black It is too late I can't go back I remember all those nights alone Stayed up late sitting by the phone All I wanted was just one call Too bad it never came at all Will anyone notice that I'm gone? Is what I have done really so wrong? I couldn't deal with all the pain Another would have drove me insane |
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Jul 21 2004, 02:42 PM
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Stacy Group: Member Posts: 220 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,199 |
You should read The Phone Call by Dorothy Parker.
Nice poem! Good work. Don't worry about the typos... you can fix it! :-D |
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WendyLynn182 Just another sad poem... read!!! Jul 12 2004, 11:19 PM
WendyLynn182 Crud I screwed up..........
***Another DAY would... Jul 12 2004, 11:23 PM lilsammie13 thats g0oOd! ;] u got talentt!! keep ... Jul 12 2004, 11:24 PM seriouslynikki man...ur gifted!!!!! I love th... Jul 14 2004, 02:59 PM _WillSkate4Shoes thats good. Can be related too in some ways for me... Jul 16 2004, 12:44 AM EmeraldKnight Wow that's depressing.. very well written too.... Jul 16 2004, 12:45 AM F_L_I_P ....its like you know me...
-Phil- Jul 19 2004, 10:44 PM winks03 good job !! i reallly like your work...ke... Jul 20 2004, 02:00 AM aZn_hApPy05 thats pretty good. next time if u made a mistake, ... Jul 20 2004, 09:55 AM vietspirit wow. you're really good at writing poems. keep... Jul 20 2004, 10:38 AM sheepy o wow i dink its really good nd deep Jul 21 2004, 09:16 PM BeautifulSoul Great poem! You've got talent so use it. Aug 9 2004, 01:27 PM F1R3B4T wow so much talent
i cud neva do stuff like that
g... Aug 9 2004, 02:07 PM sweetdreamsx3 QUOTE(seriouslynikki @ Jul 14 2004, 2:59 PM)I... Aug 23 2004, 10:34 PM
lhuvhurts thats good Aug 24 2004, 12:37 AM |
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