I Can't, Hah! I rhymed! I really rhymed!! |
 Jul 16 2004, 09:45 PM
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 Crying Behind Blind Eyes  Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967  |
I Can't
By: Savannah I can't be your heart, And I can't stand us always being apart. All I can do now is close my eyes, Hoping for the day that I might die. I no longer see your face, It's hidden, as if wrapped away in silver lace. I won't look into the mirror, Because I no longer wish to see my eyes filled with terror. I can't be your life, I'm sorry dear; I'm to busy, I can't put down the knife, Today can't you be mine? Just once; just for a moment; just this one, small time? |
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Jul 18 2004, 02:38 AM
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 Aww! ^___^ Group: Member Posts: 184 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,645 |
OMG IT RHYMED!! LOL..IM A WRITER MYSELF TOO..BUT I CAN NEVER RHYME THE WHOLE POEM!! LOL GOOD JOB..LOVIN THE WHOLE THING!!
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Sa-Chan I Can't Jul 16 2004, 09:45 PM
01-supergirl Its damn good, great job! Jul 18 2004, 03:57 AM Sa-Chan Thanks to you both! ^^ I'm glad you both l... Jul 18 2004, 11:19 AM JlIaTMK nice poem.... really like it Jul 18 2004, 01:36 PM _WillSkate4Shoes Dayng, Talent! haha it takes me forever to mak... Jul 18 2004, 02:01 PM truluvis4eva lucky butthead rhymer Jul 19 2004, 05:17 PM
bibliomania Rhymes perfectly! I envy you. Jul 21 2004, 02:43 PM |
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