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 Jul 15 2004, 04:00 PM
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 dripping destruction  Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,282 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 21,929  |
18 lines or under
here's mine. Prisoner moonlight shimmers upon a stream captive minds do roam free for life without bonds they do dream wind gently blows in the night bringing with it hope for flight from this life of oppression and fright Water trickling down the stone. bringing life for the prisoner, lone in the cell, hear the moan. Footsteps bring with them fear of what through the door might appear a fellow captive, one you hold dear feel the dread of the stone walls no one around will heed your calls nobody to help you after your falls moonlight shimmers upon a stream that brings and takes away a dream that one day you might roam free |
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Jul 15 2004, 04:03 PM
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Wow.. that's very nice.. love the vividry..
Hm.. I'll go searching for some of my poems another time.. though they're not nearly as good as the ones posted in this forum.. |
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