Hell in your eyes, Heaven in your kiss, Suicidal, love poem...er...don't ask.. |
 Jul 9 2004, 01:11 PM
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 Crying Behind Blind Eyes  Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967  |
Another poem I wrote...love...depression...suicide?
Hell In Your Eyes, Heaven In Your Kiss By: Savannah (Me) Suicidal thoughts, They cloud my weary mind. Take the knife, And slice my wrists. Bleed me dry, And let me feel your lips. Hell in your eyes... Heaven in your kiss. I wish that just once, You could look at me and know me. Truly, deep down, know me, Just once see me for me. I want to leave, But if you scream my name, Just one last time... I will stay. Suicidal images, They plague my memory. My mind and heart, Corrupted by death and rancor. I feel pain in the things, That aren't even really there. Agony and doom, Lost deep in despair. Hell...it resonates, From your fiery glare. But I'm in heaven, With your mere kiss. Cast away my suicide, Cast away my tears. Save me from today, Don't throw me away. And I'm in bliss, And I am truly happy... Here in the hell that hides, Behind your cold, hard stare. |
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Jul 11 2004, 12:41 AM
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such a good, angsty poem. i like!
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Sa-Chan Hell in your eyes, Heaven in your kiss Jul 9 2004, 01:11 PM
islandkiss wow. I like it. Jul 9 2004, 03:59 PM sheepy its umm.. good nd depressinish. Jul 9 2004, 04:41 PM ryfitaDF woah! welcome back! i havn't seen you ... Jul 9 2004, 11:53 PM x rOck mai sOcksz awesome! i love this poem ^^ nice job Jul 9 2004, 11:58 PM Sa-Chan QUOTE(ryfitaDF @ Jul 9 2004, 11:53 PM)woah... Jul 10 2004, 12:05 AM kyuubi319 wow.. thats really good.. lol, keep up the good ... Jul 10 2004, 07:44 PM
aud_chua wow............
really great poem!!! ... Jul 12 2004, 02:01 PM |
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