that night, what do you think of this poem? |
 Jul 9 2004, 01:04 PM
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 Kermit the frog = <3  Group: Member Posts: 2,315 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,215  |
give me some feedback guys!
 here I lay up on my bed.. thinking of.. that night. that moment lasted forever the kiss of his lips the warmth of his hug the love in our hearts, that night. there we sat side by side hovering above us were the enchanting stars, with his hand in mine, we watched his words, our love, that night. so, here I lay up on my bed.. thinking of.. that night |
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Jul 10 2004, 08:08 PM
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 off the wall dork Group: Member Posts: 470 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 19,070 |
wow good poem.... its so simple that its really sweet. awesome
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islandkiss that night Jul 9 2004, 01:04 PM
islandkiss C'MON AND POST GOD DAMMIT! lol.. only joki... Jul 9 2004, 02:01 PM sheepy o wow its really goood nd i mean it. is it for who... Jul 9 2004, 03:16 PM eboarder2020 Thats a tight poem...It kinda reminds me of the Da... Jul 10 2004, 08:16 PM
Darkpekkle it's a sweet poem. reminds me of my past time... Jul 11 2004, 12:23 AM |
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