about the day, of the breakup Options

[yummienoodles]

it was written a couple of minutes ago. i dont think its that good. i wanna hear from you people and see what you think of it. and if you have any suggestions, i would greatly appreicate it! thanks you guys!

It happened on that day
I remembered walking in
Knowing that soon I would see you
A few minutes later you came in
With your head down
Staring at the ground
Thinking today would be
One of the worst days of your life
You went outside
I followed soon after
Looking for you
I wondered if I should give it to you now
Found you, I sat next to you
We sit there in utter silence
Just letting time past by
We were both thinking the same thing
It was gonna end that day
Right then, I gave you the letter
We sat in utter silence again
I got up and walked back inside
Knowing that it was over
I was crying inside
I wasn’t paying attention in class
All I could think of was you
And wondering what would happen next
I feel your eyes on me
Watching my every move
Looking into your dark, cold eyes
I told you that I did it for the best
I turn away
I can’t stand looking at you like that
Inside I cry some more
I stand there watching you
Moving like you didn’t have a soul
Like you are far beyond dead
We said our goodbyes
Knowing that nothing would be the same again

[angel-roh]

awwww thats sucha sad, cute poem!! aww that poem relates to my last ex... i couldnt stop thinking bot him and thinkin` that our relationship will be over soon. i just can imagine him crying and stuff...aww thats a great poem u got there!