Depression Kills??, My First writing piece...it needs work |
 Jul 3 2004, 02:05 AM
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THIS NEEDS ALLLOOOT OF WORK
but i wrote it for a band i know and it will be one of their songs when im done iwth it some of the lines should be edited i know but can you please help me with some suggestions?? thnx lol oops for got to put it in.... look below |
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Jul 7 2004, 01:47 PM
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thnx everyone and i did feel everything that anqel_r0h said...thnx
suggestiosn anyone? |
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Squeegie Depression Kills?? Jul 3 2004, 02:05 AM
Squeegie Depression Kills
By: Devin Galloway
I'm going... Jul 3 2004, 02:42 PM sweetxsimplicity ooh nice poem. i put a star on the lines that don... Jul 4 2004, 03:36 PM Squeegie thats waht i thought...but i need suggestions Jul 5 2004, 05:04 PM angel-roh u did a wonderful job! but were u in a depress... Jul 7 2004, 01:55 AM LatinaLady oh i loveit. i feel it. i can conenct with the poe... Jul 7 2004, 02:44 AM LatinaLady oh i loveit. i feel it. i can conenct with the poe... Jul 7 2004, 02:45 AM
thisisarcycledsn QUOTE(sweetxsimplicity @ Jul 4 2004, 3:36 PM)... Jul 7 2004, 03:34 PM |
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