makes you think..., ...so sad |
makes you think..., ...so sad |
Jun 3 2004, 09:42 PM
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Once on a yellow piece of paper with green lines
he wrote a poem And called it "Chops" because that was the name of his dog And that's what it was all about And his teacher gave him an A and a gold star And his mother hung it on the kitchen door and read it to his aunts That was the year Father Tracy took all the kids to the zoo And he let them sing on the bus And his little sister was born with tiny toenails and no hair And his mother and father kissed a lot And the girl around the corner sent him a Valentine signed with a row of X's and he had to ask his father what the X's meant And his father always tucked him into bed at night And was always there to do it Once on a piece of white paper with blue lines he wrote a poem And he called it "Autumn" Because that was the name of the season And that's what it was all about And his teacher gave him an A and asked him to write more clearly And his mother never hung it on the kitchen door because of its new paint And the kids told him that Father Tracy smoked cigars And left butts on the pews And sometimes they would burn holes That was the year his sister got glasses with thick lenses and black frames And the girl around the corner laughed when he asked her to go see Santa Claus And the kids told him why his mother and father kissed a lot And his father never tucked him in bed at night And his father got mad when he cried for him to do it. Once on a piece of paper torn from his notebook he wrote a poem And he called it "Innocence: A Question" because that was the question about his girl And that's what it was all about And his professor gave him an A and a strange steady look And his mother never hung it on the kitchen door because he never showed her That was the year Father Tracy died And he forgot how the end of the Apostle's Creed went And he caught his sister making out on the back porch And his mother and father never kissed or even talked And the girl around the corner wore too much makeup That made him cough when he kissed her but he kissed her anyway because it was the thing to do And at three A.M. he tucked himself into bed his father snoring loudly That's why on the back of a brown paper bag he tried another poem And he called it "Absolutely Nothing" Because that's what it was really all about And he gave himself an A and a slash on each damned wrist And he hung it on the bathroom door because he didn't think he could reach the kitchen. wow i wish i knew who wrote it. |
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Jul 7 2004, 11:30 AM
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I am Sandy. Hear me roar. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,152 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,896 |
wow... that poem is so... wow...
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lozerface87 makes you think... Jun 3 2004, 09:42 PM
nyc_korean_hot_boy hmmmm it's a bit interesting, but still... is ... Jun 7 2004, 09:32 AM
TiNaBaBY074 its interesting..but i kind of dont get it maybe ... Jun 8 2004, 02:36 AM
dani41790 woah i been hearing alot of suicide poems lately Jun 8 2004, 04:12 AM
ComradeRed Perhaps a foreshadowing of things to come? Jun 8 2004, 11:49 AM
ComradeRed EDIT: Sorry, double post. Jun 8 2004, 11:49 AM
lozerface87 ...its about him growing older and realizing how b... Jun 19 2004, 02:53 PM
the dispatch wow...thats really deep... Jun 22 2004, 08:34 AM
maia_dc Wow, that's a really good poem... It's rea... Jun 22 2004, 09:03 AM
ryfitaDF man...
that's a fine writing...
but i'm ... Jul 7 2004, 11:47 AM
princess2113 wow Jul 7 2004, 11:51 AM
sweet wit a twist that poem...was...so....
moving... Jul 12 2004, 05:10 PM
lilambi1612 Have you enter the poetry contt this was good Jul 12 2004, 05:12 PM
sheepy aw its depressing.. Aug 1 2004, 06:47 PM![]() ![]() |