My mask, Poem Options

[kantoaznboi]

wat do u think of this poem i wrote? ur honest opinion.




When I’m around people,
I put up a mask,
Smile, laughter and joy,
But inside I feel like I’ve died.
My soul tearing apart,
My heart fragile like a piece of glass,
Shattering into a million shards,
And I cry inside,
Being strong on the outside,
Never to show my true feelings.
I try and forget you,
But you always
Come back to my thoughts.
Sadness consumes me,
And I attain a feeling,
That I am falling
In an endless pit,
Never being able to get out,
Always stuck
In my own abyss of sorrow.

Consumed with hatred and envy,
Seeing couples holding hands,
Knowing
That I will never have that with you,
My heartaches with each smile u give,
Like someone squeezing it
Til it breaks.

[angel-roh]

i gotta give u 9.999/10...just by one point...cause these poems reminded me of one of my best friend, bobby who had loved me for the last 3 years... it's like this is his feelings towards me...that poem so relates to him... dang u and bobby are like same or something? lol jk