THe Craziest Thing, a poem of mine... |
 Jul 6 2004, 12:23 AM
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umm... this is just one of my poems ive written... its not great i know but any comments would be appreciated ^^
The Craziest Thing Sometimes you got to wonder why we do the crazy things we do deceiving, betraying, destroying just to name a few But I have to say that to love is the worst nothing can make you cry so much or make your heart want to burst You'll spend endless nights wondering what you did wrong or knowing it will never be and that you've wasted your time for so long Trust me on this I swear it's all true I learned my lessons the hard way the day I fell for you. |
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Jul 6 2004, 07:52 PM
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 it onli hurts wen i breathe Group: Member Posts: 77 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 28,197 |
oo i like it! ;] .. i like the last verse the best .. idk why .. but g0od jOb.
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dreaming.of.angels THe Craziest Thing Jul 6 2004, 12:23 AM
CrackedRearView Oh wow, that's really good.
*Applauds* Jul 6 2004, 07:42 PM kantoaznboi o my
that was so good and i can totally relate 2... Jul 6 2004, 08:40 PM pOOpii_h e a dxD its great i like the last stanza Jul 6 2004, 09:24 PM angel-roh that poem relates to my past feelings. i did the m... Jul 7 2004, 01:37 AM kyuubi319 i love you poem, i can deffinitely relate to it, e... Jul 9 2004, 09:57 AM eboarder2020 WOOTAGE...Nice poem buddy... Keep em comin Jul 9 2004, 10:18 AM sheepy wow really nice.. it even rhymes ! Jul 9 2004, 09:25 PM smallymollyLINDA thatz a very good poem dat you wrote...keep it goi... Jul 10 2004, 01:54 AM x rOck mai sOcksz i luv your poem! heh writing is like...awesome... Jul 10 2004, 01:56 AM u-nizzle hey dat was a good poem and u shud come chek minez... Jul 10 2004, 04:19 AM dreaming.of.angels thank yoos for all the wonderful comments!... Jul 12 2004, 12:58 AM
lilambi1612 Thats suicidal writing it gorgeous i love it Jul 12 2004, 05:10 PM |
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