I NEED AN HONEST PERSON......, to read this |
 Jul 1 2004, 10:43 PM
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yay u clicked
 ...well i jus need a person who has time 2 read a story i have started (its only 14 pages so far) i really need an honest opinion!! i dont care if u hate as long as u tell me because i really wanna get dis book published...jus post yur email here if u do wanna read
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Jul 3 2004, 06:20 PM
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QUOTE i read it. its pretty goood but there are so bad things to it. its a little too choppy. make the sentences flow better. thanks! that helped me a lot
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diezelbabygrl_xoxo I NEED AN HONEST PERSON...... Jul 1 2004, 10:43 PM
pinkstarburst08 ill do it,,, pinkstarburst08@hotmail.com Jul 1 2004, 10:51 PM MyVermilionPlague Sure.
Email me.
briemason@earthlink.net Jul 1 2004, 10:56 PM x hYpErRoSeY x sure you can email me! xxhYpErRoSeYxx@hotmail.... Jul 1 2004, 11:01 PM TBoltzbabe email it to moi, swimgirlmb@yahoo.com Jul 1 2004, 11:02 PM XxKrNqTcUiTyxX ill read it =) my email is
alicepark88@hotmail.com Jul 1 2004, 11:03 PM Caitlin sure =)
sucha_D0RK@hotmail.com Jul 1 2004, 11:05 PM diezelbabygrl_xoxo wow so many honest ppl!! haha thanx u guyz Jul 1 2004, 11:15 PM diezelbabygrl_xoxo ok u guys...u arent respondin...either yur slow re... Jul 2 2004, 12:15 AM MisSyHangy lil_bebi_blu@yahoo.com
...lolx.. slow readers.. ... Jul 2 2004, 01:25 AM its_me sure, i'll read it..
idontnoe2@yahoo.com Jul 2 2004, 01:31 AM its_me QUOTE(its_me @ Jul 2 2004, 1:31 AM)sure, i... Jul 2 2004, 02:06 AM dani41790 i'll read it. jus email me at dani41790@Yahoo.... Jul 2 2004, 03:24 AM Billy_Talent66 Phatfarmsgirl_13@hotmail.com i want to read your ... Jul 2 2004, 03:58 AM soulovely i'd like to read it souloving@sbcglobal.net Jul 2 2004, 04:34 AM diezelbabygrl_xoxo QUOTEhey there. i read your story. its very ... Jul 2 2004, 08:42 PM lAzN YiN YanGl i wanna read it!!!!
lch0pst1xl@y... Jul 2 2004, 08:43 PM azndreamer i wanna read it!! plz and thank you.
m... Jul 2 2004, 09:00 PM MisSyHangy ..soOOo.. ::cough cough::.. hermz.. umm..
soOoo.. ... Jul 2 2004, 09:50 PM conster me me me!!!!!!
sweetxxme... Jul 2 2004, 10:10 PM aznxdreamer azndream921@hotmail.com
im writing a story too. i... Jul 2 2004, 10:17 PM babixlilac wat kind of story? o wells im gonna find out
babie... Jul 2 2004, 10:26 PM lilmamaa OMGSHERSS u look like a totall VIN DIESEL FAN..wel... Jul 2 2004, 10:47 PM diezelbabygrl_xoxo QUOTEOMGSHERSS u look like a totall VIN DIESEL FAN... Jul 2 2004, 10:56 PM *MiSSTHaNG* e-mail me, I wanna read.
missthang88@hotmail.com Jul 2 2004, 11:09 PM itz_soyoungy ill do it... but send it like 4 daiz later though.... Jul 2 2004, 11:12 PM islandkiss heaven_sent179@yahoo.com
sweet_catastrophe_xD@hot... Jul 3 2004, 08:26 AM babixlilac so wat happens...wen yoohs are done can i read da ... Jul 3 2004, 03:11 PM MyVermilionPlague That was a really good story.
Nice job! Jul 3 2004, 03:20 PM thisisarcycledsn brklynzlildevil@yahoo.com Jul 3 2004, 03:28 PM aznxdreamer i read it. its pretty goood but there are so bad t... Jul 3 2004, 03:41 PM pm3k mememe! petermai3000@hotmail.com Jul 3 2004, 04:48 PM hybrid Haha, I was just wandering around and I see this a... Jul 3 2004, 04:53 PM mzxlaughable i wanna read, x__kristina@hotmail.com Jul 3 2004, 05:25 PM stupidityhurts my summer is so uneventful. jenzwang@hotmail.com Jul 5 2004, 04:04 AM sheepy ifyoonlyknew@yahoo.com send it over :D Jul 6 2004, 08:59 PM oOjenniOo i write a lot of stories too and when i show them ... Jul 6 2004, 09:07 PM whtcheeka53 i wanna read it!! white_girl53@hotmail.com Jul 6 2004, 09:12 PM starxgazer90 Here, send it to me:
EnErGiZeRbUnNi83@aol.com Jul 6 2004, 09:19 PM shawty_redd ya i'll read it inspyrie@msn.com Jul 6 2004, 09:23 PM xBitterxSweetx all these replys saying it was good.. i wanna read... Jul 6 2004, 09:30 PM legallybrunette15 sure email me too : rosewhite1617@yahoo.com Jul 7 2004, 10:20 AM diezelbabygrl_xoxo OKAY GUYS. SINCE THERE ARE A LOT OF HONEST PEOPLE,... Jul 7 2004, 11:44 AM SiYuTiAyEe what's the story about?? count me it.. siyutia... Jul 7 2004, 11:48 AM emrzz09 i'll read it--
H4w3s@aol.com Jul 7 2004, 12:07 PM whtcheeka53 why don't you just post it on here.. and then ... Jul 7 2004, 01:35 PM LatinaLady wow thats long but ill read it to the emil is in m... Jul 7 2004, 02:08 PM bLuE_GirL23 What special 'bout da story, hm....... ok i wa... Jul 7 2004, 08:52 PM babygurl_xtacy oohhh i wana read it lol
ooh_babi@hotmail.com Jul 7 2004, 09:33 PM 0ut-0f-c0ntr0l im always up for reading, mail me at debstuh2thema... Jul 7 2004, 11:41 PM BlondE x Babii ill read it...
LiLmIsSbLoNdE916@netscape.net Jul 8 2004, 12:03 AM americasidol my old friend had me read her story (i even edited... Jul 8 2004, 10:49 AM baYbeeH i wuna read it!!!
azn_angel14_69@hotm... Jul 8 2004, 05:46 PM Mireh <-- ripmysoul@yahoo.com Jul 8 2004, 05:52 PM uT oH iiTs sTePh surrrrre email me ittsmeestephy@hotmail.com Jul 8 2004, 06:34 PM iTs eMiLeE if its not too much trouble for you.. my email is ... Jul 8 2004, 10:39 PM xsweetdreams12x I'm up to read anything!!
dreams12wis... Jul 8 2004, 10:42 PM always_n0vember I'll read it!!
always_n0vmber@yaho... Jul 8 2004, 10:45 PM ShEraBaRoO alrighty then, id be happy to read it =]
Sherabaro... Jul 8 2004, 11:48 PM xBitterxSweetx wow its really good. i'm sending you a file at... Jul 9 2004, 10:41 AM tWinKliEmE lilstarrfreak@hotmail.com
i wanna read! =] Jul 9 2004, 02:14 PM kazukizaki oooh! i'd love to read it :]
my e-mail: k... Jul 9 2004, 03:03 PM ichiban Okay sure. E-mail awayyyy =D
say_wahoooo@yahoo.co... Jul 9 2004, 03:06 PM Haruka Sure why not, i'm a writer too, i can give som... Jul 10 2004, 02:32 AM S0ULd0UT EMAIL ME (:
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hehe i'm an... Jul 10 2004, 01:03 PM lilbabicarmi no pr0b. pickone:
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s... Jul 10 2004, 04:27 PM NawtyLilAznChic ooo ooo!!! me too!!!
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moving to writing. Jul 10 2004, 11:37 PM kristeanuh kristeanuh@yahoo.com
yay i'm so excited to rea... Jul 11 2004, 12:54 AM XtinkleXtoesX yay i love stories!!!
nautylilmunk3y... Jul 13 2004, 04:45 PM Yemmerz Beep-ums.
yemmerz@gmail.com Jul 13 2004, 05:03 PM xxxlilazngrlxxx i wud luv 2 here it
lidolazngoddess@yahoo.com Jul 13 2004, 09:06 PM GyrL_wit_da_KuRLz ii WaNNa WeaD iit!!...emAiil Me babe...
-... Jul 14 2004, 12:24 AM dani41790 wow great story. man ur a realli gud writer. umm r... Jul 14 2004, 02:29 AM shawty_redd she never sent it to me Jul 20 2004, 07:10 PM diezelbabygrl_xoxo ooh sorry if i didnt send it 2 u...ahh my bad...io... Jul 22 2004, 10:35 PM kyuubi319 ooo, thats a hecka lotta pages, but ima try and re... Jul 23 2004, 09:33 AM xtremeliquid Sure.
xtremeliquid@hotmail.com Jul 26 2004, 08:44 AM diezelbabygrl_xoxo GUYZ ITZ A 167 PAGES NOW AND I JUST CANNOT SEND TH... Jul 29 2004, 11:53 PM sweetrebel3790 sure... you can email me..
charmedv3@aol.com Aug 20 2004, 10:53 PM davexd daves_xd@yahoo.com Dec 27 2005, 01:41 AM
iNyCxShoRT Sure; I'm up for a good read. Email: ignorance... Dec 27 2005, 04:48 PM |
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