A Love Poem, called Goodbye |
A Love Poem, called Goodbye |
Jul 1 2004, 07:58 PM
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![]() Clinically Insane!! ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 24 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,734 |
Goodbye
When it all comes down to this A short goodbye and one last kiss A smile appears A smile that came to hide the tears It was God's art Two people with only one heart A desicion that was thought to be made for the better Was wrong because they still wanted to be together But neither said a word So not a single thought was heard With fears of bringing back memories They changed their locks and threw away old keys They burned old clothes Dried their tears and wiped their nose And as they stood to walk away They prayed and asked God for a brand new day And they went to bed that night with their heads held high They promised themselves they weren't going to cry Lying lonely in their beds As old images played back in their heads They thought to themselves, Looks like tomorrow's just going to be another bad day If the pain from tonight just won't go away. |
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Jul 2 2004, 11:03 PM
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1'm h3r3! h0ll4! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 185 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,207 |
i really like that poem.......that's depressing......BRAVO BRAVO!!!!!!
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x__broken A Love Poem Jul 1 2004, 07:58 PM
EmeraldKnight Wow.. I like that.. depressing though.. Jul 2 2004, 01:59 AM
tu sho oh god ok every one pull out ur razors and slit ... Jul 2 2004, 02:09 AM
sheddingtears depressing love poems...
^ as for TU SHO, I ca... Jul 2 2004, 07:07 AM
Caitlin The poem was amazing =) I'm feeling alot like ... Jul 2 2004, 07:22 AM
eboarder2020 Awesome awesome awesome poem...Good stuff Jul 2 2004, 10:23 AM
Cloud_X wow...really good how long did it take you to find... Jul 2 2004, 04:58 PM
d3v1l1ci0us wow.. Jul 2 2004, 05:48 PM
Yemmerz That's good...really good. Jul 2 2004, 06:01 PM
x__broken QUOTE(Cloud_X @ Jul 2 2004, 5:58 PM)wow...rea... Jul 2 2004, 08:46 PM
girlnpink_x wow... i like it a lot.. i bet lotsa ppl can relat... Jul 3 2004, 02:11 AM
Winter That's so good. It's so depressing.. And r... Jul 3 2004, 03:20 AM
jasonjasonjason hey that is a nice poem... but it makes me sad Jul 5 2004, 09:50 PM
angel-roh awww that relates with me and my ex...wen were bre... Jul 7 2004, 01:42 AM![]() ![]() |