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![]() Funride.org ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 326 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 542,299 ![]() |
My design site is officially called Crash & Crave Designs.
The layout is at http://matt-lanter.org/crashandcrave.png I love the layout, tell me what you think. |
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![]() Onen i-Estel Edain, ú-chebin estel anim. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 425 Joined: May 2008 Member No: 653,128 ![]() |
1. There are a *lot* of jagged edges on that body.
2. Why is she blotchy and yellow in some parts? 3. Take out that random bar going through the middle 4. Text at the back is blurry/bad quality 5. Take out that horrible outline thing you have around a lot of the stuff 6. That font doesn't really suit the design imo |
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![]() Funride.org ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 326 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 542,299 ![]() |
1. There are a *lot* of jagged edges on that body. 2. Why is she blotchy and yellow in some parts? 3. Take out that random bar going through the middle 4. Text at the back is blurry/bad quality 5. Take out that horrible outline thing you have around a lot of the stuff 6. That font doesn't really suit the design imo And I can't help the jagged edged, I found this in officialpsds.com The blotchy shit is the shadow from the sun I believe in the original picture. I like the bar. ![]() How do you figure, it's not supposed to be readable. I like the outline. ![]() I also like the font. ![]() |
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 ![]() |
And I can't help the jagged edged, I found this in officialpsds.com Once again, just because something came a certain way doesn't make it right. You either have to fix it or not use it at all. I like parts, but nothing is really cohesive. The clouds, scratches, and bulk text in the back look okay...just not with that image, font, or all those bold shapes you used. It's half old school, ghetto myspace site and half classy resource site. |
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