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 Feb 20 2010, 09:57 PM
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Club at school wanted me to make them a flyer.....
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Feb 20 2010, 10:17 PM
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 Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
That just plain out sucks. There doesn't seem to be any rhyme or reason for anything. Look at other people's flyers for inspiration and ideas. Flyers can be a hard thing to do if you don't know what you are doing. And you don't know what you're doing.
and Polaroid = almost always a bad idea. so good luck with that |
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Feb 20 2010, 10:33 PM
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 poison Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 |
QUOTE(IWontRapeYou @ Feb 20 2010, 10:17 PM)  That just plain out sucks. There doesn't seem to be any rhyme or reason for anything. Look at other people's flyers for inspiration and ideas. Flyers can be a hard thing to do if you don't know what you are doing. And you don't know what you're doing. and Polaroid = almost always a bad idea. so good luck with that He said its what they wanted if you were reading and paying attention. I like the concept of it. The second one is better in my opinion. Also i would possibly make the polaroid a bit bigger. There's a lot of empty space by the polaroid. Maybe add a cherry blossom with flowers on it? And you guys i would say it sucks...thats a bit harsh. He's only trying. |
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Feb 20 2010, 10:35 PM
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 I'm Jc Group: Mentor Posts: 13,619 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 437,556 |
QUOTE(Tomates @ Feb 20 2010, 09:33 PM) He said its what they wanted if you were reading and paying attention. I like the concept of it. The second one is better in my opinion. Also i would possibly make the polaroid a bit bigger. There's a lot of empty space by the polaroid. Maybe add a cherry blossom with flowers on it? And you guys i would say it sucks...thats a bit harsh. He's only trying. he asked for critique. that's what i'm giving. |
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Feb 21 2010, 12:25 AM
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Senior Member Group: Human Posts: 525 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 695,913 |
QUOTE(brooklyneast05 @ Feb 20 2010, 10:35 PM) he asked for critique. that's what i'm giving. haha thanks im trying to fix it up now ...  Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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deteam School Flyer Feb 20 2010, 09:57 PM
brooklyneast05 what's your reasoning behind what you did? why... Feb 20 2010, 10:05 PM
deteam QUOTE(brooklyneast05 @ Feb 20 2010, 10:05... Feb 20 2010, 10:06 PM brooklyneast05 they told you to do exactly every single thing on ... Feb 20 2010, 10:08 PM deteam Sakura ...Check
Fireworks...Check
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Pho... Feb 20 2010, 10:16 PM brooklyneast05 what abbey said.
QUOTE(deteam @ Feb 20 2010... Feb 20 2010, 10:30 PM brooklyneast05 the second is worse. look how close the type gets ... Feb 20 2010, 10:34 PM deteam updated feedback please
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Subliminal Feb 21 2010, 01:20 AM Beenly what do the japanese letters stand for? Feb 21 2010, 01:05 PM deteam QUOTE(Beenly @ Feb 21 2010, 01:05 PM) wha... Feb 21 2010, 01:06 PM Beenly Uhh.. who else is making the project?
I was ho... Feb 21 2010, 01:08 PM deteam QUOTE(Beenly @ Feb 21 2010, 01:08 PM) Uhh... Feb 21 2010, 09:12 PM Tomates I like the newest version. However i still like th... Feb 21 2010, 05:48 PM Eww i kind of dont like how everything is perfectly al... Apr 14 2010, 11:05 PM deteam QUOTE(Eww @ Apr 15 2010, 12:05 AM) i kind... Apr 23 2010, 02:21 PM |
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