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[deteam]

Club at school wanted me to make them a flyer.....

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thoughts to fix it up

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Subliminal

[none345678]

That just plain out sucks. There doesn't seem to be any rhyme or reason for anything. Look at other people's flyers for inspiration and ideas. Flyers can be a hard thing to do if you don't know what you are doing. And you don't know what you're doing.

and Polaroid = almost always a bad idea. so good luck with that

[Tomates]

That just plain out sucks. There doesn't seem to be any rhyme or reason for anything. Look at other people's flyers for inspiration and ideas. Flyers can be a hard thing to do if you don't know what you are doing. And you don't know what you're doing.

and Polaroid = almost always a bad idea. so good luck with that

He said its what they wanted if you were reading and paying attention.

I like the concept of it. The second one is better in my opinion. Also i would possibly make the polaroid a bit bigger. There's a lot of empty space by the polaroid. Maybe add a cherry blossom with flowers on it?

And you guys i would say it sucks...thats a bit harsh. He's only trying.

[brooklyneast05]

He said its what they wanted if you were reading and paying attention.

I like the concept of it. The second one is better in my opinion. Also i would possibly make the polaroid a bit bigger. There's a lot of empty space by the polaroid. Maybe add a cherry blossom with flowers on it?

And you guys i would say it sucks...thats a bit harsh. He's only trying.

he asked for critique. that's what i'm giving.