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deteam
post Feb 20 2010, 09:57 PM
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Club at school wanted me to make them a flyer.....


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thoughts to fix it up

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post Feb 20 2010, 10:16 PM
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Sakura ...Check
Fireworks...Check
Info...Check
Photo to be Included...Check
Photo In Polaroid...Check

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post Feb 20 2010, 10:30 PM
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what abbey said.

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Sakura ...Check
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Info...Check
Photo to be Included...Check
Photo In Polaroid...Check

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all your stuff is like this though. you need to think more about design. just because they tell you what they want doesn't mean you slap it all together and you're good to go. that's not designing, that's completing a laundry list. there is a difference between designing and being able to use photoshop. there should be reasons behind what you do, that's what sets you apart.

clients are stupid, they don't know what they really want, only what they think they want but they don't have the vision to be able to see what it would look like.

the photo is the most interesting part of the whole poster, and should be the eye catcher (apart from the heading) but it's small and not a focal point hardly at all. a small photo in a polaroid is a dumb idea for a flyer usually. it just doesn't make any sense when you are talking about using imagery to catch someones eye.

the font doesn't read good like you said but still...just listing it out and hitting center. that's so boring and unappealing. your type hierarchy sucks too. your credit at the bottom is close to the same font size as the real information. it should never be that way. the information on the poster is way more important than your own credit. the header text that tells you what the hell this isn't' isn't dominate or drastically more focal.

your color palette is iffy here too, though not as bad as the valentines poster. red and weird peachy orangy...that just doesn't look good together.


oh yeah and the info is written badly too. there are too many extra words that aren't necessary. it could say games, free food, singing, dancing, fashion show and mean the same thing as being all wordy and saying shit like "as well as a fashion show". that's a 6 word phrase that can be communicated in two, fashion show.


and more. i duno, just think about what you're trying to say before you start designing and you will be way better off.

 

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deteam   School Flyer   Feb 20 2010, 09:57 PM
brooklyneast05   what's your reasoning behind what you did? why...   Feb 20 2010, 10:05 PM
deteam   QUOTE(brooklyneast05 @ Feb 20 2010, 10:05...   Feb 20 2010, 10:06 PM
brooklyneast05   they told you to do exactly every single thing on ...   Feb 20 2010, 10:08 PM
deteam   Sakura ...Check Fireworks...Check Info...Check Pho...   Feb 20 2010, 10:16 PM
brooklyneast05   what abbey said. QUOTE(deteam @ Feb 20 2010...   Feb 20 2010, 10:30 PM
IWontRapeYou   That just plain out sucks. There doesn't seem ...   Feb 20 2010, 10:17 PM
Tomates   QUOTE(IWontRapeYou @ Feb 20 2010, 10:17 P...   Feb 20 2010, 10:33 PM
brooklyneast05   QUOTE(Tomates @ Feb 20 2010, 09:33 PM) He...   Feb 20 2010, 10:35 PM
deteam   QUOTE(brooklyneast05 @ Feb 20 2010, 10:35...   Feb 21 2010, 12:25 AM
brooklyneast05   the second is worse. look how close the type gets ...   Feb 20 2010, 10:34 PM
deteam   updated feedback please Stay Up -1- Subliminal   Feb 21 2010, 01:20 AM
Beenly   what do the japanese letters stand for?   Feb 21 2010, 01:05 PM
deteam   QUOTE(Beenly @ Feb 21 2010, 01:05 PM) wha...   Feb 21 2010, 01:06 PM
Beenly   Uhh.. who else is making the project? I was ho...   Feb 21 2010, 01:08 PM
deteam   QUOTE(Beenly @ Feb 21 2010, 01:08 PM) Uhh...   Feb 21 2010, 09:12 PM
Tomates   I like the newest version. However i still like th...   Feb 21 2010, 05:48 PM
Eww   i kind of dont like how everything is perfectly al...   Apr 14 2010, 11:05 PM
deteam   QUOTE(Eww @ Apr 15 2010, 12:05 AM) i kind...   Apr 23 2010, 02:21 PM


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