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creole
post Feb 19 2010, 09:30 PM
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i don't need help with coding. all i need is just feedback from you guys. i'm mostly looking for things i should add/remove, change, etc.

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Mikeplyts
post Feb 19 2010, 09:38 PM
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The background seems to clash and doesn't at all match with the content colors. The orange bar is annoying, and the dark blue to solid black gradient with serifs text on top of the orange bar is even more annoying. Also, bad consistency with text (serifs text, sans-serif text, choppy text don't go well together) and colors (bright, vibrant background colors, dark colors on a header, soft colors in images, and gross, solid blue links). >_> Additionally, you could at least spice up the contact table a bit.

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