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 Jan 28 2010, 02:00 AM
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Jan 28 2010, 02:06 AM
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Typographic detail is weak. You're designing in a tic-tac-toe grid, it's an amateur's tell. The design has odd focus shifts, there's no set focal point(s). The rainbow swirl in the background is providing aesthetics, though not very good ones, it's really all there is to look at. Your choice to fonts is pretty bad. Because you didn't spend any time to change the tracking, kerning, or leading in any of the text boxes, I won't continue with a critique.
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Jan 28 2010, 02:16 AM
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Senior Member Group: Human Posts: 525 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 695,913 |
QUOTE(synapse @ Jan 28 2010, 02:06 AM)  Typographic detail is weak. You're designing in a tic-tac-toe grid, it's an amateur's tell. The design has odd focus shifts, there's no set focal point(s). The rainbow swirl in the background is providing aesthetics, though not very good ones, it's really all there is to look at. Your choice to fonts is pretty bad. Because you didn't spend any time to change the tracking, kerning, or leading in any of the text boxes, I won't continue with a critique. so fix how ? i followed a tutorial and this is wat i got lol Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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