"I am Me" |
 Dec 15 2009, 02:21 AM
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"I am Me"
I am not defined by career, education, social status, physical appearance, nor my failures. I am a genuinely good person that has slowly compromised their values. I am a corrupted person reconnecting their soul to the spirit. I have become defined by what I've let myself become. But I know who I am. I have not been myself, truly. Like a lesser parallel form of myself. I now want only to be me. Everything else will follow. |
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Jan 23 2010, 01:05 AM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
From a poetry standpoint, I think that it works. Give or take a word. It's good. How long have you been writing?
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Paladin "I am Me" Dec 15 2009, 02:21 AM
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Paladin this is not the best forum for artistic forms of e... Jan 26 2010, 09:48 PM |
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