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 Jan 22 2010, 04:52 PM
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Jan 22 2010, 05:39 PM
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Well, the field of depth is too dramatic. The background is too blurry and the subject ( grenade ) is too sharpened.
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Jan 22 2010, 06:22 PM
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QUOTE(Beenly @ Jan 22 2010, 02:39 PM)  Well, the field of depth is too dramatic. The background is too blurry and the subject ( grenade ) is too sharpened. Depth of field* Okay, so I don't know what the original image looks like, but I'm guessing it's bokeh. (Google it if you're clueless.) Bokeh is meant to focus on a subject and have a blurring effect elsewhere. Think of it like how your eye works. If you focus on one thing, the other areas you see get blurry. /defending the reason for the blurring. However, the blurriness does seem to be too much and looks fake. If you can, tone it down a bit. As JC said, the grenade looks pasted on. It gives off too much contrast and doesn't seem to fit in with the picture, making it obvious you pasted it on. Maybe you can play around with some filters and fix the lighting to make it mesh more. |
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deteam The Resistance... Jan 22 2010, 04:52 PM
deteam QUOTE(Beenly @ Jan 22 2010, 05:39 PM) Wel... Jan 22 2010, 06:08 PM
Beenly QUOTE(deteam @ Jan 22 2010, 03:08 PM) mus... Jan 22 2010, 06:15 PM Beenly QUOTE(iDecay @ Jan 22 2010, 03:22 PM) Dep... Jan 22 2010, 07:16 PM brooklyneast05 if you think about it, where the bottom of the gre... Jan 22 2010, 06:11 PM deteam QUOTE(brooklyneast05 @ Jan 22 2010, 06:11... Jan 22 2010, 06:15 PM brooklyneast05 if you have to put a bunch of effects on your text... Jan 22 2010, 06:22 PM brooklyneast05 oh yeah and another note about the sandwiching. th... Jan 22 2010, 06:25 PM Mikeplyts I think it doesn't look too shabby, but there ... Jan 22 2010, 08:46 PM elletricity First thing I saw was the tan font. And disliked. ... Jan 22 2010, 11:21 PM deteam thank you... will see what *I* can do
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