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Forever 2 The Official EP, And so it continues ....
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post Dec 29 2009, 04:56 PM
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Critique please

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post Dec 29 2009, 05:34 PM
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I think if you are going to go with a more macabre feel then the text should match. The inner shadow and the font face in general doesn't go with it. If you insist on having a more clean cut font like that then grunge it up.

The 2 just looks bad altogether. There is really no need for it.
 
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post Dec 30 2009, 11:08 AM
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QUOTE(IWontRapeYou @ Dec 29 2009, 05:34 PM) *
I think if you are going to go with a more macabre feel then the text should match. The inner shadow and the font face in general doesn't go with it. If you insist on having a more clean cut font like that then grunge it up.

The 2 just looks bad altogether. There is really no need for it.



ite so remove the 2 . . . red iris/pupil

and to grunge it up just throw some grunge brushes on it ?

should i also remove the inner shadow, then grunge it ?

or keep both>?

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