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post Dec 29 2009, 04:56 PM
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post Dec 29 2009, 05:06 PM
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you could make the guy look creepier.
i think the dirtiness on him kinda take a lot away, and you can do better. like you can't really see some of his features well. maybe give him a scar instead of coating him with dirt.
if you made the 2 in his eye look like it was part of his eye/pupil, that would look neat
this could look sharp, i think thumbsup.gif

 
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post Dec 29 2009, 05:17 PM
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QUOTE(Eww @ Dec 29 2009, 05:06 PM) *
you could make the guy look creepier.
i think the dirtiness on him kinda take a lot away, and you can do better. like you can't really see some of his features well. maybe give him a scar instead of coating him with dirt.
if you made the 2 in his eye look like it was part of his eye/pupil, that would look neat
this could look sharp, i think thumbsup.gif



and how would i go about making that "2" blend in more with the eye/pupil?

and ya ill work on some scarring . . and it was purposely done not 2 see some features shifty.gif

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