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Just something for my friend, thoughts?
deteam
post Dec 21 2009, 02:51 AM
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post Dec 21 2009, 06:02 PM
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i didn't read any of the other responses cuz i dont have the time but im gonna quickly give you c&c;
1] picture qualities mesh w/ each other. not good. have high res pics for both instead of one shabby and one high.
2]what are those dots on the bottom of the fire? it looks really wierd and out of place.
3]lighting in the pic doesnt match lighting of everything else
4]there's smoke at the top but every where else there isn't
5]when working w/ fire; you should have light reflecting from the flames onto the pic itself unless you want the burning effect in which you should burn the edges etc
6]the edges of the pic can be seen.

i like the colors and effects on teh font but things like perspective and lighting should be taken into consideration when you do something liek this

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post Dec 21 2009, 11:03 PM
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QUOTE(Christy @ Dec 21 2009, 06:02 PM) *
i didn't read any of the other responses cuz i dont have the time but im gonna quickly give you c&c;
1] picture qualities mesh w/ each other. not good. have high res pics for both instead of one shabby and one high.
2]what are those dots on the bottom of the fire? it looks really wierd and out of place.
3]lighting in the pic doesnt match lighting of everything else
4]there's smoke at the top but every where else there isn't
5]when working w/ fire; you should have light reflecting from the flames onto the pic itself unless you want the burning effect in which you should burn the edges etc
6]the edges of the pic can be seen.

i like the colors and effects on teh font but things like perspective and lighting should be taken into consideration when you do something liek this

good luck. thumbsup.gif


thanks, imma try and fix up some of these things

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