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 Dec 9 2009, 05:05 PM
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This is a flyer I'm working on for the music fest. I really need some feedback on this. I feel as if the green is too much. I need a different color break it up. Watcha think?
 Edit: I still haven't worked on the other one yet, but I did start on another one. What do ya think about this one?  Edit: V2  |
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Dec 17 2009, 01:58 PM
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 사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 |
The second one's design is okay, but the text needs to be cleaned up, esp the top and bottom. The yellow over the text is also a bit distracting.
That being said, the first one isn't necessarily more artistic, but the clean edges appeal to me more. |
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vandosanchez flyer Dec 9 2009, 05:05 PM
Beenly You are definitely right. The green strokes at th... Dec 9 2009, 05:11 PM Eww i think it looks neat, and what everyone else said... Dec 9 2009, 05:47 PM Mikeplyts I agree with everyone else so far, and I also thin... Dec 9 2009, 07:01 PM vandosanchez I think i'm just going to change the color of ... Dec 9 2009, 08:24 PM karmakiller I don't mind the font, but I do agree that it... Dec 9 2009, 08:28 PM
elletricity QUOTE(karmakiller @ Dec 9 2009, 05:28 PM)... Dec 9 2009, 08:49 PM HeartOfPandora The text should really pop out from the background... Dec 9 2009, 09:30 PM vandosanchez I am going to put more info on the bottom. I just ... Dec 10 2009, 06:09 PM vandosanchez see wha ya think? Dec 17 2009, 01:15 AM ZeT0 The first one is much more artistic, and cleaner. Dec 17 2009, 01:36 AM vandosanchez Really!? Because on the second one I drew ever... Dec 17 2009, 09:07 AM ZeT0 With a crayon?
It's grainy and doesn't flo... Dec 17 2009, 11:21 AM vandosanchez The effect on the text is part of the look but I... Dec 17 2009, 06:02 PM |
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