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 Dec 9 2009, 05:05 PM
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This is a flyer I'm working on for the music fest. I really need some feedback on this. I feel as if the green is too much. I need a different color break it up. Watcha think?
 Edit: I still haven't worked on the other one yet, but I did start on another one. What do ya think about this one?  Edit: V2  |
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Dec 9 2009, 09:30 PM
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 i like boobies, yes I do. I like boobies - how 'bout you? Group: Member Posts: 620 Joined: Jun 2008 Member No: 662,457 |
The text should really pop out from the background. It's a good font, it's just that the words blend in with the background. Tone down the background, get a wider range of colour, and do some more with the text.
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vandosanchez flyer Dec 9 2009, 05:05 PM
Beenly You are definitely right. The green strokes at th... Dec 9 2009, 05:11 PM Eww i think it looks neat, and what everyone else said... Dec 9 2009, 05:47 PM Mikeplyts I agree with everyone else so far, and I also thin... Dec 9 2009, 07:01 PM vandosanchez I think i'm just going to change the color of ... Dec 9 2009, 08:24 PM karmakiller I don't mind the font, but I do agree that it... Dec 9 2009, 08:28 PM
elletricity QUOTE(karmakiller @ Dec 9 2009, 05:28 PM)... Dec 9 2009, 08:49 PM vandosanchez I am going to put more info on the bottom. I just ... Dec 10 2009, 06:09 PM vandosanchez see wha ya think? Dec 17 2009, 01:15 AM ZeT0 The first one is much more artistic, and cleaner. Dec 17 2009, 01:36 AM vandosanchez Really!? Because on the second one I drew ever... Dec 17 2009, 09:07 AM ZeT0 With a crayon?
It's grainy and doesn't flo... Dec 17 2009, 11:21 AM elletricity The second one's design is okay, but the text ... Dec 17 2009, 01:58 PM vandosanchez The effect on the text is part of the look but I... Dec 17 2009, 06:02 PM |
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