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 Dec 9 2009, 05:05 PM
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This is a flyer I'm working on for the music fest. I really need some feedback on this. I feel as if the green is too much. I need a different color break it up. Watcha think?
 Edit: I still haven't worked on the other one yet, but I did start on another one. What do ya think about this one?  Edit: V2  |
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Dec 9 2009, 08:28 PM
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 DDR \\ I'm Dee :) Group: Mentor Posts: 8,662 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 384,020 |
I don't mind the font, but I do agree that it's not very memorable... to be honest I'm not sure if it's even attention grabbing right now. Is the text you have on it now the only text you're going to have?
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Dec 9 2009, 08:49 PM
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 사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 |
QUOTE(karmakiller @ Dec 9 2009, 05:28 PM)  I don't mind the font, but I do agree that it's not very memorable... to be honest I'm not sure if it's even attention grabbing right now. Is the text you have on it now the only text you're going to have? Pretty much this. It needs something to make it pop out when people pass by it. A good resource for colour combinations besides Colour Lovers is Color Scheme Designer 3. I think orange would be a really interesting colour to combine the green with. I feels a bit too empty at the bottom. You should do something with the space there! Is there any relevant information to the event that you could put in :3 |
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vandosanchez flyer Dec 9 2009, 05:05 PM
Beenly You are definitely right. The green strokes at th... Dec 9 2009, 05:11 PM Eww i think it looks neat, and what everyone else said... Dec 9 2009, 05:47 PM Mikeplyts I agree with everyone else so far, and I also thin... Dec 9 2009, 07:01 PM vandosanchez I think i'm just going to change the color of ... Dec 9 2009, 08:24 PM
HeartOfPandora The text should really pop out from the background... Dec 9 2009, 09:30 PM vandosanchez I am going to put more info on the bottom. I just ... Dec 10 2009, 06:09 PM vandosanchez see wha ya think? Dec 17 2009, 01:15 AM ZeT0 The first one is much more artistic, and cleaner. Dec 17 2009, 01:36 AM vandosanchez Really!? Because on the second one I drew ever... Dec 17 2009, 09:07 AM ZeT0 With a crayon?
It's grainy and doesn't flo... Dec 17 2009, 11:21 AM elletricity The second one's design is okay, but the text ... Dec 17 2009, 01:58 PM
vandosanchez The effect on the text is part of the look but I... Dec 17 2009, 06:02 PM |
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