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Dec 9 2009, 05:05 PM
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This is a flyer I'm working on for the music fest. I really need some feedback on this. I feel as if the green is too much. I need a different color break it up. Watcha think?
![]() Edit: I still haven't worked on the other one yet, but I did start on another one. What do ya think about this one? ![]() Edit: V2 ![]() |
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Dec 9 2009, 07:01 PM
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![]() Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
I agree with everyone else so far, and I also think that the font should be spaced just a bit or maybe have some kind of shadow because for me, it's a bit hard to read. I think you should use a darker green for the font as well. I'd like to see some sort of object on the bottom though. Maybe something like a paint palette or some people working on their art projects? Heck, maybe just some kind of scenic, watercolor picture could do. Otherwise, nice job.
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vandosanchez flyer Dec 9 2009, 05:05 PM
Beenly You are definitely right. The green strokes at th... Dec 9 2009, 05:11 PM
Eww i think it looks neat, and what everyone else said... Dec 9 2009, 05:47 PM
vandosanchez I think i'm just going to change the color of ... Dec 9 2009, 08:24 PM
karmakiller I don't mind the font, but I do agree that it... Dec 9 2009, 08:28 PM
elletricity QUOTE(karmakiller @ Dec 9 2009, 05:28 PM)... Dec 9 2009, 08:49 PM
HeartOfPandora The text should really pop out from the background... Dec 9 2009, 09:30 PM
vandosanchez I am going to put more info on the bottom. I just ... Dec 10 2009, 06:09 PM
vandosanchez see wha ya think? Dec 17 2009, 01:15 AM
ZeT0 The first one is much more artistic, and cleaner. Dec 17 2009, 01:36 AM
vandosanchez Really!? Because on the second one I drew ever... Dec 17 2009, 09:07 AM
ZeT0 With a crayon?
It's grainy and doesn't flo... Dec 17 2009, 11:21 AM
elletricity The second one's design is okay, but the text ... Dec 17 2009, 01:58 PM
vandosanchez The effect on the text is part of the look but I... Dec 17 2009, 06:02 PM![]() ![]() |