Layout: RaveGirl, Constructive criticism plz Rating Options

[crazy303]

This Layout was rejected because (and i quote);

*the image is clearly not well designed ;it\'s just a \"neon glow\" effect on a picture of a girl changed to red. the structure of the layout isn\'t strong either.*

first off christy, thats your opinion and it doesnt speak 4 every 1 sum ppl like simple layouts and secondly the image is NOT just a girl and a neon glow it just so happens that i made a vector design put it on a blank canvas added a girl made the boxes and then turnd it into a neon glow. as far as structure wat makes it strong eh? dnt be so uptight and mean while rejecting layouts maybe u should tell them wat u think could help fix it.

Any way here it iz if u dont agree with christy n would like this layout let me know.

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P.S. This post was and is not intended to bash christy n any way she has her opinion and we have ours so christy if u read this n take it badly im srry that was/is not my intentions.

Reason for edit: Use [thumb] tags for large images. -Gabrielle (Elletricity)

[heyo-captain-jac...]

Could someone link me to the preview, if possible? I suspect a few bugs in the code, and I want to see how it looks outside of 1024x768 on IE in windows.

[crazy303]

Could someone link me to the preview, if possible? I suspect a few bugs in the code, and I want to see how it looks outside of 1024x768 on IE in windows.

heres a link to my myspace im using this layout as of right now so u can see what it looks like.

I can see a very very light shadow reflection on two of the boxes and on the "Rave Girl" sign- Looking at it, its so so so light that it looks like its not suppose to be there.

They are sopose to be there and if u look at my profile you will see the rave girl isnt just a tittle *thing* its a flash banner thus yes it is sopose to have a slight mirror reflection.

[Blyat]

heres a link to my myspace im using this layout as of right now so u can see what it looks like.
They are sopose to be there and if u look at my profile you will see the rave girl isnt just a tittle *thing* its a flash banner thus yes it is sopose to have a slight mirror reflection.

Kay then imo Just make it a little lighter so its more noticable
And i didn't know it has a mirror look on the rave girl, but she still looks unshaped still like she should look a little cleaner on the edges
just saying...

I Think you should fix this up and show us a modified version this has potential

[crazy303]

Kay then imo Just make it a little lighter so its more noticable
And i didn't know it has a mirror look on the rave girl, but she still looks unshaped still like she should look a little cleaner on the edges
just saying...

I Think you should fix this up and show us a modified version this has potential

I like you u give me hope HAHAHA

and thanks every 1 4 ur input on this layout i guess i should have informd you guys i had made this layout rather quickly 1 night *after a party* so it explains y its so poorly made i just wanted tips on how to improve it and also i know the res is low (1024x768) its just that my laptop that i use 4 all my design related stuff is *out of service* due to a broken power supply so im using my momz old a$$ laptop wich sux i should have mine up n running soon i hope n redeem myself with a layout im sure u guys/girls would love i jst need my comp back =/

[Blyat]

I like you u give me hope HAHAHA

and thanks every 1 4 ur input on this layout i guess i should have informd you guys i had made this layout rather quickly 1 night *after a party* so it explains y its so poorly made i just wanted tips on how to improve it and also i know the res is low (1024x768) its just that my laptop that i use 4 all my design related stuff is *out of service* due to a broken power supply so im using my momz old a$$ laptop wich sux i should have mine up n running soon i hope n redeem myself with a layout im sure u guys/girls would love i jst need my comp back =/

No excuses son,
Just take the criticism and fix it