Layout: RaveGirl, Constructive criticism plz Rating Options

[crazy303]

This Layout was rejected because (and i quote);

*the image is clearly not well designed ;it\'s just a \"neon glow\" effect on a picture of a girl changed to red. the structure of the layout isn\'t strong either.*

first off christy, thats your opinion and it doesnt speak 4 every 1 sum ppl like simple layouts and secondly the image is NOT just a girl and a neon glow it just so happens that i made a vector design put it on a blank canvas added a girl made the boxes and then turnd it into a neon glow. as far as structure wat makes it strong eh? dnt be so uptight and mean while rejecting layouts maybe u should tell them wat u think could help fix it.

Any way here it iz if u dont agree with christy n would like this layout let me know.

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P.S. This post was and is not intended to bash christy n any way she has her opinion and we have ours so christy if u read this n take it badly im srry that was/is not my intentions.

Reason for edit: Use [thumb] tags for large images. -Gabrielle (Elletricity)

[Blyat]

Like a lot of people said
*Tacky *Messy *hard on eyes *Cristy could of been more harsh (trust me i've seen that little girly be a fire cracker :p)


Overall a Layout it like a drawing imo, If you draw it your going to get basically the same critiques (harsh or not)
Imo on a art point of view (instead of looking at it as JUST a layout cleanliness and pict) especially since a lot of people have given the layout opinion and i don't want to sound TOO repetitive

Overall the concept of the idea is nice, but
I can see a very very light shadow reflection on two of the boxes and on the "Rave Girl" sign- Looking at it, its so so so light that it looks like its not suppose to be there and its a mere poor cleanup to the layout.

The Girl and the swirls are also very messy, there are some things that are flowing out (like the right side) that looks like its not suppose to be there
If you MADE this neon effect, practice making it look sharper and more shape to the picture so people can read it easier,
Her bust and her left leg looks a tad UN-shaped and funny

The font should look somewhat related if you don't want them to be the same exact

Now hopefully i don't sound mean, but a lot of times for pictures you have to look at more *what others want to see and expect, just not your likes and expectations*


Hopefully this kind of helped, i tried my best . ___.;;
***ant better sharper quality/clarity


did you make the rave girl and the swirls or are they just stamps?