Layout: RaveGirl, Constructive criticism plz Rating Options

[crazy303]

This Layout was rejected because (and i quote);

*the image is clearly not well designed ;it\'s just a \"neon glow\" effect on a picture of a girl changed to red. the structure of the layout isn\'t strong either.*

first off christy, thats your opinion and it doesnt speak 4 every 1 sum ppl like simple layouts and secondly the image is NOT just a girl and a neon glow it just so happens that i made a vector design put it on a blank canvas added a girl made the boxes and then turnd it into a neon glow. as far as structure wat makes it strong eh? dnt be so uptight and mean while rejecting layouts maybe u should tell them wat u think could help fix it.

Any way here it iz if u dont agree with christy n would like this layout let me know.

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P.S. This post was and is not intended to bash christy n any way she has her opinion and we have ours so christy if u read this n take it badly im srry that was/is not my intentions.

Reason for edit: Use [thumb] tags for large images. -Gabrielle (Elletricity)

[jiyong]

Imo the layout would look more organized if you made it into a single column layout and put the image of the girl either to the left or the right. I'm not a fan of any neon-type effects, either - tbh, it seems a bit... tacky :/ I don't know what other word to describe it is. I'm not trying to offend. I would also suggest using the same font for all the headers, and putting the "Rave Girl" text right above the single column (this is assuming you change it to one column).

Eh, I don't know what else to say. The buttons are pretty pixelized (you might want to up the quality on those). I think my biggest problem is that the layout doesn't flow very smoothly and the elements don't go well together (I don't mean the colours).