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funride
post Oct 15 2009, 08:51 PM
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I dont like it, I just wanna see what you guys have to say.
 
 
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JonHMChan
post Oct 16 2009, 05:14 PM
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There are a few things here. (1) I would change the colors to complement the images you're using. It will look more cohesive, and right now it's looking imbalanced to the left because the two images are very similar. (2) It does look a bit empty in the background right under the text. It may be that you don't want anything there and it will get too busy, but that's something that stood out to me. (3) Your three images are very similar -- notice the way she turns her head and how it's the same in each one. It's very redundant. Mixing those up, and getting different poses should help.
 

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